Wednesday, June 19, 2013

Review: A Monster Calls

My neighborhood has been saddened by the passing of one of our own due to cancer. It prompts me to offer up this remarkable independent reader/young adult title for anyone who has children grappling with the  emotional fallout of such a tragedy. The novella also has deep resonance with adults. The unflinching honesty of the author's perspective and the mythic metaphor used leaves us no where for repressed emotions to hide. Out in the open air our emotional wounds can heal. Repressed inside they fester. This book is about being brave enough to heal what remains.
Godspeed.

(Walker Books)
A MONSTER CALLS 
by Patrick Ness 
inspired by an idea from Siobhan Dowd
illustrated by Jim Kay
(trade paperback)  

“You do not write your life with words...You write it with actions. What you think is not important. It is only important what you do.” 

This is dark fiction at its best, the marriage of terrifying imagery with the true fears of the flesh. Grown from an outline by cancer victim and fellow Carneige Medal winner Siobhan Dowd, Patrick Ness weaves a gentle tale of a young teen's journey through his guilt, anger and sorrow as he comes to terms with the real monster in the room, his mother's advancing cancer. 
The monster, the towering green man comes to intrude on the boy's living nightmare insisting on sharing tales with twisted morality in hopes of saving the boy from his own collapse. All the boy needs to do is tell the truth
The monstrous visitor is a wicked, fearful and, yes, funny sage as intent in his mission as he is with destruction. His manifestation allows young Conor to get out of his head and confront himself. What's better when you feel like a monster yourself than to have him hound you in the flesh (or in this case, in the twig).
The book is for all ages so don't let the fact that it is illustrated give you the wrong impression. Jim Kay's work is manic and organic, a wash of grey shadows, images as equally fascinating as they are menacing; a perfect backdrop.
Death, however it is doled out is what links man to man. How we deal with the looming figure and the fallout after it touches our lives is our truth. There are no words for its power over us... or so I thought. With its macabre visitor this book forces us to confront these moments in our lives with more emotional clout than a heartbreaking memoir ever could. Only by having the shadows of our darker, quiet moments actually speak to us, for us, could these authors speak to our battered souls.
Share this book with any family touched by this relentless disease. Everybody knows one or lives in one. This novel is a new classic sure to be a perennial favorite on young adult shelves for lifetimes to come.
THINK: Animated combination of Ness' artwork with image capture directed by Rob Reiner, ghost written by all remembered by a pink ribbon.

Thursday, May 23, 2013

The Few for All

For the men and women and their families 
who because of their sacrifices 
we are free to launch Summertime 
with barbeque, beach and beer. 
As you share a slice of the American dream 
this weekend remember that we are forever in their debt.
 

The Few for All

For all we take for granted,
for all we’ll never know,
for the promise in our parent’s smiles,
and the price paid to keep it so.

For the men once boys, and grown women,
who answer the call and know not when,
their hopes and schemes and lifelong dreams,
might be put on hold with a solemn, 'til then.

For the courageous few, who in our midst,
know this world as it truly is;
that life is not just the here and now,
fond farewells, fist bumps, whoops and wow;
but that life is all these fleeting things and more;
fragile at best, worth preserving; hence the chore. 

For those who lost their lives in service,
alas, each has won the war of wars,
by giving us all on familiar shores, 
through struggle, strife and immeasurable sorrows, 
a promise fulfilled of more blessed tomorrows.

For the stalwart soldiers, ambassadors of peace,
your actions prove to all the prayers we keep,
of a world where wars need not be fought,
of a world where loved ones need not weep,
these are more than ideals from a gifted state,
but are vows that make our country great.
-S.E. Toon

Friday, April 26, 2013

Story Circle Tale #3

Thanks to all the kiddos who helped craft a story at our Story Circle conducted at the playground at Library Plaza in Marshfield on April 17th in front of Ocean Village Bookstore. Here is the resulting story. Enjoy and keep checking back at www.OceanVillageBookstore.org for info on the next circle. What is a Story Circle? It is part improvisation, part storytime. Our resident author weaves a story based on the contributions of the attendants. This opens children up to their creative side, enforces positive social skills through participation and gives them a sense of pride and accomplishment when the final product is read and they can say, "I helped make that!"

Prince without a Crown

Once upon a time there was a dog, not your ordinary dog mind you, but a royal dog. You could tell because he wore a crown; that, and he was confined to the Queens lawn. That wasn’t a bad thing because her lawn was always green and manicured. Most of all it was safe.

One morning however the dog, let’s call him Prince, pranced out of the castle to do his royal business in the back end of the Queen’s estate, the only place that wasn’t clover green and lush. It was there, far from the castle, out of eyeshot of all that could see that an arm sheathed in black leather napped the regal pup. It wasn’t a difficult task for the dog  no more than a handful. Now I know what you’re thinking, ‘You should have said that Prince was nabbed’ but he is after all a dog and being such I’m pretty sure you would say napped, as in dog-napped not dog-nabbed but I digress…

No one from the castle saw the dark night, the stormy knight, the Black Napper as he galloped away with the Queen’s Prince. No one save for me. ‘This shall not stand!’ a inner voice braver than my own hollered. My own fear-filled voice called out towards the castle.

I stammered, “G-g-g-guards? GUARDS! Bad Knight. Dog napped! Crown nabbed!” Why anyone would listen to the hollers of a commoner I’ll never know, but yap I did, not as loud as the voice in my head but far louder than Prince as he disappeared past the edge of the forest.

The Queen’s guards must have heard the urgency in my howling for they charged out of the castle in pursuit of the Black Napper and the royal pooch. They chased them hill and dale, swoosh past the low lying trees, ca-splash through the not-so-shallow stream and ba-doom in and out of the pothole in the middle of the forest road.

The Napper cackled though his black metal helmet. “Moo har, har, I have indeed done it! I have nabbed (he obviously didn’t know the correct word for his nefarious actions either) Yes, nabbed the royal…”

He lifted his arm that cradled the pooch only to find just the smallest of crowns, not a hair of the dog to be found under his flapping dark and stormy cape. With the guards closing in he had to keep retreating into the dark of the forest and tend to the now un-napped later.

A crownless dog ran down the meadow that hugged the path to a quant village bordered by waves of heather that grew so high that all one would see was Prince’s perky tail if one chose to look. No one did for there was no one in the village to come to the dog’s rescue. Prince yapped in the village square but not even the echo of his bark replied. Sitting in the center of the abandoned village he felt all kinds of alone. First he had been stripped of his regal crown and now he had no subjects to bark orders at. No stone wall protected him from the outside world. He looked side to side. Nothing. Prince looked down preparing to let out a whimper that no one would hear. He stopped mid-whimp, more of a mew really, when he realized that without his crown his load had been lightened. Carrying the weight of royalty with him his whole life Prince never before knew what freedom felt like. His head felt as light as a balloon. He felt, well, free. He ran back to the forest path his body cutting through heather like a feather slices sky.

He came to the edge of the path; to the left the Queen and hers castle, to the right the Black Napper with the guards on his tail. Prince sat down to ponder a second time. His less-heavy head turned from side to side and back again. He panted as he pondered. We all have crowns be us canine or kid. It was true since the top of everyone’s head was indeed a crown. Prince scratched at some fleas which were aplenty in the meadow. If we all have crowns we all have a royal duty to one another whether one’s crown was encrusted with jewels or just hair. With that thought Prince stopped his slobbering panting and swallowed. The little pup knew what he had to do. Rising slowly and with purpose, his little chest puffed up, his slight shoulders broad, Prince journeyed toward the dark and stormy knight who had nabbed his crown (I’m sure of it now, you nap a dog, you nab a crown… whatever.).
His fear had been replaced with freedom, now freedom was replaced with bravery. Prince’s stride was close to a strut as the forest seemed to swallow him whole. It was his royal duty to his people just as it is everyone’s to stand up to that which they fear.

It was not long before he caught up with the guards or should I say the guards caught up with him as they retreated back out of the pitch of the forest. They past Prince and retreated to the Queen’s castle, a whirlwind of hooves, dust and desperation.

When the dust cloud cleared something black against the black of the forest shifted. Prince could hear the gold of his crown as it clanked against the horse bridle as the Napper neared. The knight painted bad straddled his matching steed. More darkness shifted behind him. White, bony arms and legs shuffled and clattered in the dark. It was the Black Napper’s army of ghouls; let’s call them hench-zombies for lack of a better name, flanking him on both sides. They were skeletons actually, not exactly the monster of choice when confronting a cur. A dog would just assume claim a bone for his own, gnaw away until bored, then bury the bones back in the ground where they had arisen. They were poor excuses for zombies now that you think about it, no bellies at all. Even if they were hungry their munching would be futile. O.K. they were definitely not zombies, not the best ghoul for the job but they were definitely hench.

Prince barked as dogs are wont to do, just like panting and scratching fleas. It wasn’t fear-filled or a my-dinner-bowl-is-empty yammer, it was a warning. Even with the threat in his growl what could a dog no larger than a good-sized house cat do to back up such a bark. Royal or not, he had only one option. He ran… home. It’s O.K. He didn’t chicken out. If he did he would have ba-cawed. Prince you see had a plan.

The Dark Napper would have caught the dog with the tail between his legs in short order if it wasn’t for the knight’s rattling lackeys who’s all out attack was nothing more than a shamble. Slow but sure, the bumbling horde followed Prince to the Queen’s castle. The drawbridge was down awaiting his return. Prince crossed the bridge as fast as his little legs would carry him. Despite his urgency the guards were unable to raise the gate before the Black Napper and his white hench-bones arrived.
Prince barked. It was an order now not a warning. From behind him a legion of commoners, the good folk of the village filed out of the castle to confront the evil.  The Napper’s horse reared and the crown fell between Prince and the Dark One. Another bark and the townspeople pushed to either side. The long shadow of the queen neared. The Napper’s henchmen cowered, bones chattering against bones in nervous rhythm. The Napper’s horse turned to run throwing the knight alongside the crown. His army returned to dust. The Queen’s shadow neared. Another bark and it was the Dark Napper’s turn to howl. He lumbered to his feet and ran disappearing in a whirl of ash as he cleared the bridge. The remnants of the banished evil fell from the sky like tears of coal.

The Queen ever so gracefully went to the side of Prince. With her snout she retrieved the crown. A few strikes of her paw straightened the bedazzled crown on the one we all possess. The village cheered, “Good Queenie!” The coat of her collie coat around her neck glistened like ermine, each hair danced on air. The townspeople applauded their miniscule hero, no longer a mutt but their one true Prince. From that day forth whenever the townspeople bid one another a good knight it was in reference to him.

From that day forth everyday was a dog day and a dog day was always a good day in the kingdom where everyone wore a crown.

Saturday, December 29, 2012

A Lighthouse in Wintertide


Sean Harris BGN
It has something to do with light.

Candles, bulbs, roaring fires and the stars above; this time of year is heralded by them, cutting through the darkness of a Winter’s night. Mankind has always followed the illuminated path for eons as we search for light in the darkness of insanity.

They not only light the way, they are the way. Singular candles hold vigil in households beckoning loved ones safe return. We watched 26 lone flares disappear in the chilled night sky, snuffed out by the darkness between the stars. Cathedrals and roadsides are adorned by a congregation of candles lit to honor the memories of the lost. The Maccabees saved their tribe's tradition by coveting the flame. Churches, Mosques, and open hearths draw diverse peoples closer to the warmth. 


Stars are nothing but the brilliance of our past; events ceased long ago; memories hanging in the night sky. They have embellished many a nation’s flag inspiring hope. The very twinkle of that which may no longer exist lights the way for all to wish to deliver either exotic spices or goodwill.

Not all candles are so hallowed. Some sputter more smoke than light. These candles forged long ago are cast of poor tallow. It is a reflection of generations of starless nights. If their lone spark hasn’t been extinguished there lies hope. Otherwise the smoldering ash is a child of the unbridled wind.

The world is a calamity at best, randomness we spend lifetimes forcing symmetry to. How can one stoke this sacred flame when the reckless winds of time are so relentless? We have all seen lives pass away and new ones begin in this dark Solstice. We’ve seen flames that once burned bright falter and cease. Like remembrance candles, each flame will eventually be snuffed out by the passing of time.

Then I look into a baby’s eyes as they perused the
beauty and complexity of our world. There the flame burned the brightest and the most pure, its glow reflected in her parent’s eyes, their parent’s eyes, and in all who bear witness. How can such a fragile entity capture such power so effortlessly?

I spoke with a person whose loss was as raw as a freshly scraped knee in a schoolyard. Despite her melancholy a glow came over her face as tales were told, warm memories rekindled, and as words were shared a smile not thought possible moments before shone.

Then I got it. What broke through the shadow of her smile was not solely hers; it was that of her deceased loved ones. Their legacy was passed on in her every thought, deed, and grin. In those moments we are at our best; reflective, resilient, and humble. It was the same flame burning bright in that child’s eyes, a reflection of her soul and those of all who preceded her. In the shadow-play cast by that dancing flame, I believe I saw God wink.

Shelter that flame. Remember when it burned brightest and pass that memory forward. No darkest night, no tempestuous wind can permeate its glow. Don’t worry if it withers down to a spark. You are never truly in the dark. You still possess the makings of a righteous fire.

May you find safe harbor led by the light that burns within. Hold your loved ones close, be them by your side, away, or in the hereafter. Shine. Then passion enflammée; your passion will reawaken. Then you too can look into a fire through a child’s eyes and get it.

It has something to do with light.


(special thanks to Lotti, Amy, Shelagh, Charles Bukowski, Nick Lowe, and Newtown.)

Saturday, December 1, 2012

Writing Hell week 4

It is the end of Nanowrimo 2012.

What is this Nanowrimo? National Novel Writing Month, 50,000+ words of a novel in 30 days. As of midnight I clocked in at 90135 words, well over 50,000  of the tallied words less than a month old so in the course of this exercise I over doubled the pages of my manuscript to now just over 300 pages. My last novel clocked in at 400 pages so because I took on this task and kept to it I am three quarters of the way to a completed 1st draft of The Kahunas of Lobster Cove. Now I don't expected the pages to actually be readable to others until Springtime but I appreciate the productivity of my efforts.

So according to Nanowrimo I am a winner, right? Does the novel have to be finished as well to qualify. FYI: just in case I added the words "The End" to the conclusion of my last writing, Chapter 16; Ebb Tide, so there!

Now there is a new manuscript to be dealt with, one I can no longer shove into the bottom drawer of my writing desk.

  • STILL my job search is a total failure, I am still unemployed with the nation's and my own personal fiscal cliff looming.
  • STILL my toilet sings to me (at least is stopped crying)
  • STILL my tub decides to not drain, then drain, and then not drain, at will.
  • STILL my car rabbles and shakes and now decides to pee through whatever gas I can afford to give it. Mechanics say driving it can't make it much worse and as I listen to its choppy idle I agree.
  • STILL my phone and internet connections cut out long enough to contact my provider, then return after an appointment has been set, then return. "They can't fix what ain't broke" they tell me and for them to come to my home would be fruitless and they would have to give me another bill I can't pay.
  • STILL my thermostat is locked at 40 degrees as it have for three seasons now

  • STILL my writing continues.
 You can see how each bullet point impacts the others, a quantum theory that make my nights long and my teeth grind. Now it seems the only place where the rush of "What if"s and "What Now"s fade into the distance is when I write. Who would have thought?

Nanowrimo forced me to write out of my comfort zone. During the scary ride I learned the depth and the strength of my characters much to my surprise. Plot-points, never charted or even dreamed of, appeared on the page leaving me as surprised as the characters dealing with them. Most of all I read as they led with their hearts. On my best pages they weren't pontificating about life, they were living it.

I will take their lead. When this new novel is complete (or for the Nanowrimo police, "Now that my new novel is complete...) I hope that the readers can gleem what I have from its telling.

Its December 1st. 
NaNoWriMo, National Novel Writing month is over. 
PerFiJoMo, Personal Job Finding month has begun. 

oh yeah, and coming soon, NaHo-Ho-HoMo, but I don't even want to think about that yet. 
One deadline at a time.


-S.E. Toon


Thursday, November 22, 2012

Writing Hell week 3

The Kahunas of Lobster Cove
So today is Thanksgiving.

It is also the end of the third week of Nanowrimo 2012.
What is this Nanowrimo of which you speak? It is National Novel Writing Month, a godless endeavor where thousands of people attempt to write 50,000+ words of a novel in 30 days while the rest of the nation honors veterans, gives thanks for our freedom, honors the misrepresented history of our country's discovery, helps our fellow man through whatever a bitterness Mother Earth can dish out, and, let's not forget participates in the contact sport called Black Friday. Nanowrimo is a narcissistic practice of the Literati and I am a participant. You're welcome.


As if reaching 50,000 words wasn't enough, I decided to double the word total. Trust me, in doing so I am nothing close to the heroes that inhabit the pages I am churning out. I decided to include previous pages that I have been conveniently rewritten to fit the changes in the story's plotline that arose while cranking out 2,000-3,000 words a day. My three week total is 70,763 words HOWEVER the new-page total is only a mere 34,498. There are only 9 days left. For me to reach the 50,000 words minimum and a be an honest-to-God Nanowrimo Winner I need to crank out 1,723 a day. This is achievable since I have been averaging 2000 new words per day. I thought I was writing not doing math (which I was NEVER good at, thus, writing... duh!)

Someone who became a master by twisting their legs into pretzels once said "Its not the destination its the journey." (humble apologies to writing guru, Natalie Goldberg,author of Writing Down the Bones and to anyone else who is flexible enough to do the downward pretzel and have that feed their writing.) Writing is its own transcendental discipline. Self-imposed goals such as Nanowrimo force the writer to experience the insights of the process. Its like the writer's mantra. "Writing is writing, so write" Of course Nanowrimo does ignore the second tenant of a writer's philosophy, "Writing is Rewriting" but I digress.

I did an exercise with my creative writing students where they came had to come up with affirmations on writing and the creative process. We posted them in our writing space to inspire us each day we approached a blank page. I started them off with this little chestnut; "Write right, right?" then followed it with "Write, write, write!" Nanowrimo could care less about the first phrase but it burns incense at the alter of the second. Enough said.

Its Thanksgiving so here's my obligatory short list of grateful shout-outs:

Family. Having a creative in the family must be a lot like Michael Jackson's Never-land. While it initially sounds like a really fun idea to have an amusement park in your backyard, it's still kinda weird to everyone else. Thanks for your patience.
Friends. They say you can count your true friends on one hand. I have been blessed in my life to the extent that I'd need to be the Indian goddess Shiva to count them all.
Beasts. Pallet, the miracle cat of Borders. You are here for me, and I for you. Without sounding like a cat lady, let me say you are a constant reminder of just how interdependent we are.
Children. The ones I teach, the ones who decorate my neighborhood with inspiration and ears eager for a story, and my newborn niece, little Lotti. May I  always see the world through your fresh eyes.
Past. Writers don't have bad times, they gain material. One of my mother's favorite phrases was, "This, too will pass." Whether it is good times or bad, her words hold true. It is all the more reason to write, as she did in her day, and I in my own twisted way, do now.
Muse. The miracle of a story on a page will never cease to amaze me. Being a conduit to bringing a tale to life is forever a humbling experience. It is there we do our best work.

With 1,700 words a day in 9 more days it feels appropriate to close with the beginning of the poem Sea Fever by John Masefield that my Dad would recite from his chair. (I have even included an excerpt of it in my latest novel.) Thanks Dad for that. It was probably those magical moments listening to him pull words out of thin air and the patient hours my sister read to me that still puts me in the writing chair day after day. 

I must go down to the seas again, to the lonely sea and the sky,
And all I ask is a tall ship and a star to steer her by.  

Thank you all for being my ship as I shoot for the stars.

-S.E. Toon

Thursday, November 15, 2012

Writing Hell week 2

The Kahunas of Lobster Cove
So today is the end of the second week of Nanowritmo 2012.
What pray tell is nanowritmo? It is Nation Novel Writing Month.
In November.
Turkey time.

During the past decade I had found myself in the wonderful world of retail which, by definition, requests that you surrender all other aspects of your life to your job. In most business environments near 60% of annual profits occur in just five short weeks. To succeed it demands sacrifice. As much as I think opening during the holidays, the dreaded Black Friday and elongated hours are a blight on humanity, from a business perspective, I understand the desperation in the retail establishment's hellbent efforts.

It always seemed an impossible task, to write, to work, to fit living a life between the two.
But here I am unemployed with a manuscript in need of completion. What excuse could I possibly have not to embrace this crazy proposition. I should feel liberated and free to write with abandon, shouldn't I? But no. I know this sounds like the crazed words of a syphilitic mind but I miss it all, so much. The team leading, the feverish multi-tasking, the communing with shoppers like an elf with the perfect gift for everyone on their list. Unemployment wears on you. It slowly eats away at your self-worth while the financial crisis that grows with each passing week gnaws at your innards each sleepless night.

A lot of noise to cut through when you want to concentrate on story and character.Still, I made a commitment to myself, daunting as it may be, 100K or whatever it takes to finish a draft by December 1st.
What could go wrong?

Toilet.
For no reason it starts dripping, tap, tap, tap as I try to tap, tap, tap on my keyboard. Then it starts to trickle just as my words cease to flow, then a stream, in the bathroom, not from my imagination. No funds for a new toilet or, god forbid, a plumber (you are such the joker!) so I spend the next two days, dissembling, replacing piece by piece to no avail. Once, Twice, thrice. Tap, tap, tap now only on the bathroom floor. In a last ditch effort I reassemble it once again, this time reenforced with silicone throughout, even on the inner porcelain walls where I suspect a hairline crack. Finally dry on the outside. It grumbles every now and again just to remind me that I have just put the beast to sleep. Before bedtime I threaten it with a roll of Duct tape like a priest with holy water. "The spirit of Christ compels you, out demon!!"

Car.
If that wasn't enough madness to keep me from the keyboard, my car, or as I have come to name her, Beelzebub, decides to have a conniption, its idiot lights blinking a cartoon engine while the motor shakes in fits and starts. As I accelerate it sounds like a prop engine on a dingy. I make it to the repair station and leave it, heading home to wait the prognosis. The bathroom goes tap, tap, tap. I try to mimic it with keystrokes. The car will cost over a quarter of my monthly income so I have to figure that out alongside automatic payments, a mortgage payment and holidays looming. With a lot of penny pinching I might be able to swing the car in time to dash through the woods to the new grandmother's house. I'm told that I can drive the car at my peril without any more damage to the engine (save for it stalling and not being able to be restarted.) Driving now is like sitting in front of a Jack in the box as someone slowly turns the crank. You drive forward, not unlike the country, hands clenched to the wheel waiting for Chuckles to burst forth as soon as you let your guard down.

Still, the story waits for me.

Enough bitching. It could be deadlines, papers that need to be graded, lives that need to be saved, bones needing to be mended, babies that need to be burped. Its always going to be something. It's called life. The key is to persevere. Success never comes to those who don't try. 

Nanowritmo is a marathon. You just don't quit the race because to get a stitch or run out of metaphors 
(that, perhaps, could be a good thing -wink-)

Tap, tap, tap... (this time not coming from the bathroom.)



Week Two: 
44948 words in 14 days
GOAL: 100,000 words (or the finish line, whichever comes first.)

Thursday, November 8, 2012

Writing Hell week 1

So today is the end of the first week of Nanowritmo 2012.
What pray tell is nanowritmo?

Why Nation Novel Writing Month. It is always November because no one has anything else to occupy their time during that month. No impending holidays and the stress that they can compound. Thank the stars, that would making trying to crank out a manuscript for a novel that clocks in at 50,000 word in 30 days a nerve-wracking experience.

I'm all in. Let's start writing. This is my own personal method.

S.E. Toon's First Level of Writing Hell.
Now my process of writing involves taking extensive notes both on plot and on character development. I write the first draft in long hand because I find it an organic form of making my thoughts real. I can cross things out, put an asterisk on a passage and add to it or question it for a re-write. I can lasso parts and draw arrows to where it should be moved to. In short, to anyone but myself, it is an indelligable mess. The secret service should use my method. IMPORTANT: No one should ever read this draft.

S.E. Toon's Second Level of Writing Hell.
Then I decipher my mad scribbles and type them into my word processor. At this stage I am editing, waxing poetic, polishing as I write. Reading the computer screen, making another pass then print. IMPORTANT: No one should ever read this draft.

S.E. Toon's Third Level of Writing Hell.
Then its time to make the pages bleed. I take out my trusty read pen and correct grammar, dreaded adverbs, delete extraneous back story. Delete, delete, flesh out, delete again. Get another pen because the present one has run out of ink, and repeat. Then I type the bloody page back into the computer, futzing and tweaking as I type. IMPORTANT: No one should ever read this draft at this time but I let them just so they can drill me a new one. I've learned from my experience as a graphic artist that what you usually miss on your third pass, the final markups, is not the mouse type, its is what is in the largest font size. Same with writing for me. Dumb tense mistakes, passive phrasing, more show, less tell. Only another writer's eyes can take off my blinders.

Then its rinse and repeat.

You can't do this in nanowritmo! 

Nanowritmo's New and Improved (?) Level of Writing Hell.
This is a race, not a stroll. Your writing needs to be a stream of consciousness relying on your inner voice. The words need to go directly into the computer devoid of editing save for a smidgen of spell checking.  This is so against my nature I find it maddening. I still refer heavily to my notes to get me on a writing jag and I confess I have already broke down and hand written a passage before typing. So you do what's necessary, write like every letter is sacred and when you get to the finish line this warning still applies, IMPORTANT: No one should ever read this draft.

I keep thinking of what I tell my creative writing students. Writing is rewriting. First you need something to rewrite. You can't create a sculpture without a block of stone (and if you are some kind of smarty pants that wants to say, 'Sure you can. You can make a sculpture out of steel, paper, even macaroni.' I'll have to hunt you down and stab you in the throat with my metaphor.)

See what's happening?? ARRRRG! Now I so want to add this blog to my week's total (645 words) alongside the words I enter each week into LiteraryBookie.Blogspot.com (1602 words), even my grocery list (88 words, very hungry). I could use them all woven together as an example of extreme fiction to create a YA House of Leaves.

Or maybe I should just stop typing here and get on with my story.

Week One: 
27,103 words in 7 days
GOAL: 100,000 words (doable but at what cost?)

If you want to join in the insanity, better late than never. 
Share the misery. See you in hell!

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Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Got Your Nose

IN CELEBRATION OF ALL HALLOW'S READ YOU CAN UPLOAD YOUR OWN COPY OF THIS SHORT STORY BY S.E. TOON, NOW UNTIL MIDNIGHT HALLOWEEN NIGHT. 

The only thing you have to fear is fear itself.

Meet your worst fear.


Three teens find themselves the victims of a cruel prank and are locked in an abandoned asylum on, of all days, All Hallow’s Eve.

Even worse, the building knows what really scares them and conjures personal nightmare worlds for each of the intruders.


It is up to each teen to battle the malevolent building’s manifestations and confront the real fears haunting their lives. Only then will they truly be free.

Come inside. Don’t be afraid.

Good luck with that.



  It is formatted as a booklet and has (2) PDF files. One is the text, the other the cover. You can go to your local print shop and have them make the booklet for you (est. cost $2.40) or just read it on your computer. You can also load it into your personal reader if you choose. Copyright. All Rights Reserved. Not for sale.

the link is Http://TalesbyToon.jigsy.com

Special Thanks goes out to fellow storyteller Kymberly Anderson for getting the story up on the web and to my junior high Creative Writing Boot Camp participants, Haley, Mellissa, Alyssa, Alexah, and Allison, who inspired this story during one of our "cluster" sessions. Pleasant screams!